Book Review: The Mark of the Damned by C.D. McKenna

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


C.D. McKenna’s The Mark of the Damned continues The Vorelian Saga with a focus on power struggles, moral complexity, and a world facing collapse. It’s a detailed, dark fantasy that leans into complex characters and political intrigue, set against a backdrop of magic and uncertainty.

The plot picks up where The Blood of the Lion left off. King Morei is dealing with the fallout of his battle with Diemon, which has left Geral in ruins and whispers of blame circling. Syra takes on a dangerous mission to locate the Infernol and stop the Lirallian Empire from rising, while Cyrus is forced to confront a major choice: become a Dragon Rider or remain an outsider. The book switches between these narratives, giving a wide view of a world unraveling.

The story’s strengths lie in its ambition and scope. McKenna has built a rich fantasy world with multiple layers—cultures, histories, and power systems that feel lived-in. The writing is descriptive and often atmospheric, with attention paid to character motivations and the consequences of their choices.

For fans of high fantasy with intricate plots and darker themes, this book offers a lot. But it’s not for everyone—especially those looking for fast-paced action, lighter themes, or a more streamlined story. There are clear echoes of authors like George R.R. Martin and Brandon Sanderson in terms of tone and scope, though this installment doesn’t yet reach the same level of clarity or narrative control.

In short, The Mark of the Damned is a thoughtful and ambitious continuation of a complex saga. While it struggles with pacing and focus at times, it brings depth and intrigue for readers who appreciate morally gray characters, layered world-building, and long-form storytelling. It’s a solid addition for those already invested in the series but may be a challenging entry point for new readers.



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